形容你的衣服
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运用本课词汇形容你正在穿的衣服。它用的是什么材料？你通常穿什么去上班？去参加活动或派对时你会穿什么？你最喜欢的套装是哪件？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 1
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I am wearing my favourite red t-shirt and dark short pants right now. It is made from 100% cotton fabric. It is a short sleeve t-shirt with a crew neck and there are pictures of cartoon on it. Usually, I dress for work in the business casual dress as follow our company dress code. My choices always pants suit, slacks and blouses and sometimes I wear skirts. I will make sure that the dresses allow me to work comfortably at work place. With some make- up will make my face brighter and glowingly and my shoulder-length hair tie into a pony tail. I will dress follow the type of events or parties such as a long dress matched it with some jewellery or accessories. Never forget to match it with the right make-up, hair style, handbag and shoes. I always try to make it all a perfect match. My favourite outfit is casual like a white t-shirt and jeans.
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I am wearing my favourite red t-shirt and dark short pants right now.( If you describe the shorts second then I imagine you will describe the shorts and not the T-shirt .) It The T-shirt is made from 100% cotton fabric. It is a short sleeved t-shirt with a crew neck and there are pictures of cartoons on it. Usually, I dress for work in the business casual dress as follow laid out/stipulated in our company dress code. My choices is always a pants suit, slacks and a blouses and sometimes I wear skirts. I will make sure that the dresses allow me to work comfortably at in the work place. With Some make- up will makes my face brighter and glowingly and my shoulder-length hair is tied into a pony tail. I will dress follow according to the type of events or parties, such as a long dress matched it with some jewellery or accessories. Never forget to match it with the right make-up, hair style, handbag and shoes. I always try to make it everything all a perfect match. My favourite outfit is casual wear like a white T-shirt and jeans.
When you are talking about what you normally wear to work or to parties you cannot use the future (will) because you are talking about habits.
hi Lisa, you only made mistakes in your grammar. The spelling and quality of your submission were excellent.
I am wearing my favourite red t-shirt and dark short pants right now. My t-shirt It is made from 100% cotton fabric. It is a short sleeve t-shirt with a crew neck and there are pictures of cartoon on it. Usually, I dress for work in the business casual dress of as follow our company dress code. My choices is always pants suit, slacks and blouses and sometimes I wear skirts. I will make sure that the dresses allow me to work comfortably at my work place. With some make- up to will make my face brighter and glowingly and my shoulder-length hair tied into a pony tail. I will dress to follow the type of events or parties, such as a long dress matched it with some jewellery or accessories. Never forget to match it with the right make-up, hair style, handbag and shoes. I always try to make it all a perfect match. My favourite outfit is casual like a white t-shirt and jeans.
Neil
I am wearing my favourite red t-shirt and dark short pants right now. It is made from 100% cotton fabric. It is a short sleeved t-shirt with a crew neck and there is a cartoon on it. Usually, I dress for work in the business casual dress as follow our company's dress code. My choices always pants suit, slacks and blouses and sometimes I wear skirts. I will make sure that the dresses allow me to work comfortably at my work place. With some make- up, it will make my face brighter, more glowingly and my shoulder-length hair tied into a pony tail. I will dress to fit the type of event. or party, such as a long dress and matched it with some jewelery or other accessories. Never forget to match it with the right make-up, hair style, handbag and shoes. I always try to make it all a perfect match. My favourite outfit is casual, like a white t-shirt and jeans.
You are really starting to communicate. There was no problem understanding what you were saying. The corrections mainly clarify your thoughts
Good Job, I agree with Grahams comments.
Neil
Good, Lisa. Since you seem very advanced in English, I have written some alternate ways of writing what you mean. See below:
I am wearing my favourite red t-shirt and dark short pants right now. It is made from 100% cotton fabric. It is a short sleeve t-shirt with a crew neck and there are pictures of cartoon on it
better, I think:
The short-sleeve t-shirt with a crew neck is made from 100% cotton fabric and their are cartoons on the front..
Usually, I dress for work in the a business casual dress as follow required by our company dress code. My choices always Sometimes I choose a pants suit (pantsuit), slacks and a blouses and sometimes I wear a skirts. I will make sure that the dresses allow me to work comfortably at my work place. With some make- up will I wear make-up to make my face brighter and glowingly and I tie my shoulder-length hair tie into a pony tail. I will dress follow accordint to the type of events or parties I attend. In such cases I wear as a long dress matched it with some jewellery jewelry or accessories. I never forget (I always match...) to match it with the right make-up, hair style, handbag and shoes. I always try to make it all a perfect match. My favourite outfit is casual like a white t-shirt and jeans.