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I live in japan , hokkaido island.
I want to visit europian cuntries .
My last trip is thaialnd , bangkok .
I want to visit europian cuntries .
My last trip is thaialnd , bangkok .
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I live in Hokaido islan, Japan. I want to visit Europe cuntries . My last trip is in Bangkok, Thailand.
I live in Hokaido Island Japan. I want to visiting Europe Countries. My last trip was Bangkok Thailand.
thats a lil bit notice from me ^^
I am living in Japan which is in Hokkaido Island. I want to visit Europian countries . My last trip was Bangkok, Thailand
Btw, good try!!! ^^.
Hi, Tai san. ohisashiburi desu ne
Ogenki desuka?
Here a bit correction from me, hope helping^^
I live in Hokkaido, Japan. I want to visit Europe countries. I went to visit Thailand, Bangkok on my last trip.
Ganbarimashou^^
DanQir
thank you very much !!
it are many mistake this time. i will try more study !!
D,Ria
Thank you very much repeir my sentence !
marshmallow
thank you very much !!!
antphy
thank you very much!!!
hisasiburidesune ^^ genki desuyo !! ariagtou .
apa kabar ?? sedang sibuk kah?
terima kasih berbaiki ya !
I want to visit European countries.
My last trip was bangkok, Thailand.
hi yara!!
terima kasih berbaiki ya !
saya belajar bahasa indonesis dan inglish !
tepi belum cukup saya kira haha .
kapan kapan aja saya akan lancar bahasa indonesia !!
This is how I would fix your submission.
I live in Japan on the island of Hokkaido. I want to visit European countries. My last trip was to Bangkok, Thailand.