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英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 5
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I love traveling. My last vacation was in Bali, I really enjoy the time. I was with friends but that time I love to go alone, either to beach or shopping. On vacation time I love to do something different, searching the interesting things, meet new people, and explore the true living of the city. I have been in Beijing twice, firstly when I was learn Chinese in 2004 and the second time I was with family, so I can tell that Beijing is the most recent city I went for holiday. I recommend to other travelers, before they go to do the vacation, they better to do some research about the city, the famous places, the culture, and some rare things which is they never see or felt before. Doing what you want to do for your enjoyable time is most important in holiday.
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great job.
but pay attention for tenses "enjoyed not enjoy" and "i was learn chinease" what tense is this "i learned chinease or was learning" better
very good.. congratulations.. your phrases is wonderful. I liked your vacations.
I love traveling. My last vacation was in Bali, I really enjoyed my the time there. I was with friends but that at times I love to go alone, either to the beach or shopping. On vacation time I love to do something different, searching the for interesting things, meeting new people, and exploring the true living life of the city. I have been in Beijing twice, firstly when I was learning Chinese in 2004 and the second time I was with my family, so I can tell you that Beijing is the most recent city I went have visited for a holiday. I recommend to other travelers, before they go to do the on vacation, they had better to do some research about the city, the famous places, the culture, and some rare things which is they have never seen or felt before. Doing what you want to do for your an enjoyable time is the most important thing during in your holiday.
A good effort.