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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 3

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my favourite restaurant here in my country is Pardo's chicken, they make delicious food, when i go to the restaurant my favourite dish is barbecue, they prepare the best barbecue, well that is for me.....but i don t go alone...i go with my family....they prefer chicken....well when i finish my barbecue i order a cake....oh my god
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  • @aNaToLiS
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  • @aNaToLiS
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    You now here is the point> Oh my God.. You underline approvel taste emotions.. Very delicious food/ good gippo, mayne chicken are not from deep freezer,, Sometimes they can say daily chicken, but.. In cooking is comestible materials (material is may be not right word) very important. barbucue is the best food maiking redy technic..I can suggest always for drink beer.. ps> would You like to give phone number from this restauraunt. I give a call..
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  • laraopz
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    very good, i don't have any remarks well done
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  • MPR82
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  • MPR82
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    Jajaja 'cake...oh my god'!! Muy bien - the barbecue sounds good :)
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  • Gilgy
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    Barbecue's a style of cooking, not a dish. Barbecued chicken is one popular barbecued food.
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