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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 3, 课程 2

描述家用物品

说明： 描述一栋房子内三个房间里的物品。例如：小垫子铺在门厅。 镜子挂在壁橱外面。 厨房水槽在厨房里。

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Today is Sunday, I am take a rest and studying English now.
Yesterday is Saturday, Jun the 21th,2008.
Tomorrow is Monday, but I will be working. That day will Jun 22th,2008 of this week frist day.
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  • joy
    Mochapoints: 1908  |  教师分: 773
    Today is Sunday. Currently, I am taking a break and studying English. Yesterday was Saturday, June 21st, 2008. Tomorrow is Monday, the 22nd, but I will be working. What is the day of the week?? Monday (we don't say the first day). but good job :-)
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  • Yuri_K
    Mochapoints: 49129  |  教师分: 31519 (92%)
    H'm! Did you made all deliberately wrong? Today is Sunday, you are studying English carelessly. Yesterday it was Saturday, June the 21st, 2008. It will be Monday tomorrow, you are working. It will be June 22nd, the first day of the week.
    一年多前提交的
  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12201  |  教师分: 10323 (100%)
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  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12201  |  教师分: 10323 (100%)
    Nice piece of work Demi! There are some mistakes on the verb tenses. Most of them had been corrected by your friends. Keep on the good work. Cheers Eliz
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