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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 1

描述你的一天

说明: 运用本课词汇描述你的一天。现在是几点?20分钟前是几点?今天上午你几点起床的?你会在几点睡觉?

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Here it is 9:20. 20 minutes ago were 9. I got up at 7 and i going to bed at 12.
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  • Martin
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    Good.

    It is 9:20in the morning here in Columbia. It was 9 o'clock twenty minutes ago. I got up at 7 in the morning and I will be going to bed at 12 tonight.

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  • Simon
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    Need more work..

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  • Flynn
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    Now, it is 9:20. 20 minutes ago it was 9. I got up at 7 and i will go to bed at 12.

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  • Mr.WOLF
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    Weii done

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  • Ryan Smith
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    Now it is 9:20 here. Twenty minutes ago, it was 9:00. I got up at 7 this morning, and I will go to bed at twelve tonight.

    You can also say, "I got up at 7am today, and I will go to bed at midnight."

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  • yasin
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    Here it is 9:20 0920*

    20 minutes ago, were it was 9. 0900

    I got up at 7 0700, and i I am going to go to bed at 12. 0000

     

     

    ---- = wrong

     

     

     

    ---- = right

     

     

     

    *comment:

    After saying 0100, 0200, 0300, 0400 0500 ect., ect., you should say "hundred hours" (you do not write this)

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Correct edition:

    Here it is 0920

    20 minutes ago, it was 0900

    I got up at 0700, and I am going to go to bed at 0000

     

    此内容要求 "Adobe Flash Player."
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  • smax
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    Here is is 9:20. 20 minutes ago it was 9. I got up at 7 and I will go to bed at 12.

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