日常活动
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使用本课词汇描述你在每天特定时间的活动。比如：我在早上7点之前刷牙。我在上午八点从家出发去工作。我晚上11点睡觉。
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 201, 单元 8, 课程 2
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Hello!^0^ How do you do? I’m sick now~~*0*!
Last week, I go to “Science Camp” at “Karnjanabure” with my school, very fun. Thailand have a little cold day, but that 3 day very cold. This year is “Science Camp 19”.Next year is “Science Camp 20”.School will have a big camp. I want to go. If I have time, I will go. Sure!!
First day. I’m week up at 5 o’clock. We go to “Karnjanabure” by bus 3 hour. I very sleepy, But I can’t sleep. Because my friend play guitar, sing a song and dancing.ToT…When our alive,We began play game. This game name is “Monito” mean “Buddy”.Do you know this game？When we played, we can meet many people in the camp,And have “Killer” game.This game is new. If I draw lots word get “Fight”. I will make some people say “Fight”, When friend say this word you have, You’re winner. But This game it’s not easy same I think.
Second day, on the morning. Teacher have many Science Games. This place have many animal. And have big snake. When I played game. I don’t see around. And than I sit near a bi
Last week, I go to “Science Camp” at “Karnjanabure” with my school, very fun. Thailand have a little cold day, but that 3 day very cold. This year is “Science Camp 19”.Next year is “Science Camp 20”.School will have a big camp. I want to go. If I have time, I will go. Sure!!
First day. I’m week up at 5 o’clock. We go to “Karnjanabure” by bus 3 hour. I very sleepy, But I can’t sleep. Because my friend play guitar, sing a song and dancing.ToT…When our alive,We began play game. This game name is “Monito” mean “Buddy”.Do you know this game？When we played, we can meet many people in the camp,And have “Killer” game.This game is new. If I draw lots word get “Fight”. I will make some people say “Fight”, When friend say this word you have, You’re winner. But This game it’s not easy same I think.
Second day, on the morning. Teacher have many Science Games. This place have many animal. And have big snake. When I played game. I don’t see around. And than I sit near a bi
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Hello!^0^ How do you do? I’m sick now~~*0*! Last week, I went to “Science Camp” at “Karnjanabure” with my schoolmates, much fun. Thailand was a little cold, and that 3 days were very cold. This year is “Science Camp 19”.Next year is “Science Camp 20”.School will have a big camp. I want to go. If I have time, I will go. Sure!! First day. I woke up at 5 o’clock. We went to “Karnjanabure” by bus ,it cost 3 hours. I was very sleepy, But I didn't sleep. Because my friend played guitar, sang a song and danced.ToT…When we were awake,We began to play games. This game's name is “Monito” which means “Buddy”.Do you know this game？When we played, we could meet many people in the camp,And had the “Killer” game.This game was new. I drew a lot of words to get “Fight”. I must make some people say “Fight”, When a friend say this word you have drawn, You’re the winner. But This game was not an easy game,I thought. The second day, in the morning.,teacher had many Science Games. In this place there're many animals. And big snake. When I played game,I didn’t see around. And then I sat beside a bi?
LeMin, it's cool that you write long! You are communicative! It's very important and positive! :)
Be careful about your grammar! English do not work in the same way as your own language.:) Watch the differences!
Good luck to you! Liza
How are you? NOT How do you do?
Last week - I went... it was fun
It's a little cold today in Thailand
I get up
I'm sleepy
my friend is playing the guitar, singing a song and dancing
this game is called... which means ...
I draw lots of words
this game isn't easy, I think
On the first day... On the second day... etc.
There are many animals here