你这个星期在做什么？
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你这个星期在做什么？ 你要搞什么活动？ 什么时间？ 哪几天最忙？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 102, 单元 4, 课程 2
 LUCIO BARBOSA C...'s 提交内容: | 平均分数: |
I work as the receptionist in a small hotel in the coastline.
Work every day of the week of second fair the Friday fair.
In the final of week I have rest of the work, I go to the park, to the club or the times I go to the movies or to the shoping Center.
And a much tiring work more I like a lot than I do.
Work every day of the week of second fair the Friday fair.
In the final of week I have rest of the work, I go to the park, to the club or the times I go to the movies or to the shoping Center.
And a much tiring work more I like a lot than I do.
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loubycheMochapoints: 2999 | 教师分: 742 (0%)Hello Lucio, It's not bad. I will try to correct somes mistakes that I noticed, but actually I'm like you I'm just beginner in english :D: "I Work everyday of second fair the Friday fair. In my weekends I take a rest of the work, I go to the park, to the club or sometimes I go to the cinema or to the shopping Center" Hope I gave you a hand! Keep it up!! 一年多前提交的 -
ambroiseMochapoints: 7070 | 教师分: 5456 (0%)Lucio, good effort. Nice vocabulary choice too. The first sentence is fine, although you would write "on" the coastline. Then: "I work every day of the week. I'm off on the weekends. That is when I like to go to the park, the club, or sometimes to the movies or shopping. I tend to like more active jobs than the one I have now." (If I understood you correctly.) 一年多前提交的 -
JocaMochapoints: 691 | 教师分: 55 (0%)
Hola Lucio. Puedo ayudarte con mi idioma nativo, el espanol mas no con el ingles pues solo se lo basico de este. Es mejor que te revise tus avances de ingles un nativo de esa lengua. Suerte con el ingles. 一年多前提交的 -
JuzinhaMochapoints: 957 | 教师分: 34Weekends are the end of the week. 一年多前提交的
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