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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 2

食品采购

说明: 运用本课词汇描述上一次采购行程中你买到的食品。你只去一家店购买所有东西吗?最贵的是什么?最便宜的是什么?你有没有买以前没尝试过的东西?这星期你会用买来的东西做什么菜?

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During my last grocery shopping trip I bought a lof of fruits such: bananas, peachs, abricots, strawbarrys, dates. I went only to one store to buy everythings.The most exI bought also one item that I never tied before.I will be making this week one salad of fruits.
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  • Alex_Kazahana
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    ... such as : peaches,apricots,strawberries,...

    I went only to one store to buy everythings.The most excited thing was when I also bought an item that I never tried before.

    Very nice!!! Be carefull at grammar

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  • Aek.B
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    During my last grocery shopping trip I bought a lot of fruits such as: bananas, peaches, apricots, strawberries, dates ... I went only to one store to buy everything. The most exciting was when I bought something  I have never tried before. I will be making this week a salad of fruits.

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