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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 2, 课程 4

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The woman has long black curly hair , and his eyes are sweeties. The man has a red mustache , the girl has long blonde hair , and her libs are beautifull, she does not have a curly hair. You has short black hair and me have short brown hair, I am not bald.
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  • Sara.
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  • Shoba
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    The woman has long black curly hair and his eyes are sweeties.<(I am not sure what you mean by this.)  The man has a red mustache,<(The comma (,) goes immediately after the last letter of the word.)  the girl has long blonde hair, and her libs are beautiful, She does not have a (Using "a" means she has only one (1) hair.) curly hair. You have short black hair, and I have short brown hair. I am not bald.

    Very good.  Don't be discouraged by the mistakes, mistakes are usually a part of learning a new language.

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