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I don't remember when I vacationed last time. It seems like a very long time ago. I like traveling and I have a job that permitted me to be in some places I have never dreamed of visiting. But this is not vacation.
My last vacation was at Baile Herculane, a mountain town in Romania. It is an ancient resort. It used to be a architectural jewelry but now things has changed, unfortunately. But the surrounding are beautiful. It is an ideal place for someone who loves mountains but also comfort.
My last vacation was at Baile Herculane, a mountain town in Romania. It is an ancient resort. It used to be a architectural jewelry but now things has changed, unfortunately. But the surrounding are beautiful. It is an ideal place for someone who loves mountains but also comfort.
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I don't remember THE LAST TIME I WENT ON VACATION. It seems like a very long time ago. I like traveling and I have a job that permitS me to GO TO some places I have never dreamed I WOULD VISIT. But this is not A vacation. My last vacation was at Baile Herculane, a mountain town in Romania. It is an ancient resort. It used to be a architectural jewelry but now things haVE changed, unfortunately. But the surrounding areA IS beautiful. It is an ideal place for someone who loves mountains but also comfort.
Note: architectural jewelry (this does not make sense, I don't know what you were trying to say)
Well done, except for a few problems with verb/subject agreement.
I don't remember when I vacationed last time. It seems like a very long time ago. I like traveling and I have a job that permitted permits me to go be in to some places I have never dreamed of visiting. But this is not a vacation. My last vacation was at Baile Herculane, a mountain town in Romania. It is an ancient resort. It used to be a architectural jewelry, but now things has have changed, unfortunately. But the surroundings are beautiful. It is an ideal place for someone who loves mountains but as well as also comfort.
Very good! There are a few problems with verb agreements and prepositions, but overall it is quite good.
I don't remember when I vacationed last time. (or: ...when I went on my last vacation.) It seems like a very long time ago. I like traveling and I have a job that permits me to be in some go to places that I have never dreamed of visiting. But this is not a vacation. My last vacation was at in Baile Herculane, a mountain town in Romania. It is an ancient resort. It used to be an architectural jewel, but now things have changed, unfortunately. But the surrounding area is are beautiful. It is an ideal place for someone who loves mountains but also as well as comfort.