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描述一下你在咖啡厅里点了什么。什么是你quick喜爱的饮料？你点了三明治或者甜点吗？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 2
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When I go in the park, I read a book. But if it is warm and sunny, I can play some sports or make jogging. I like to be at the park because of fresh air and greenery. It helps me to relax.
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"When I go to the park, I read a book. But if it is warm and sunny, I can play some sports or go jogging. I like to be at the park because of the fresh air and greenery. It helps me to relax."
Very good writing. I have suggested a few changes. Well done. :)
you are great!! :))
just pay attention to what boneman said, ok?
when I go to the park