形容你的街道
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透过你家窗户观察并描述街道上的动静。行人和车辆都在往哪个方向流动？客人怎么从街道走到你家？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 201, 单元 7, 课程 2
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My favorite restaurant is a fish restaurant in front of the sea ...
The food is excellent ..and very fresh .
The waiters are very nice and efficient
The panorama est wonderful ! And if you are lucky the iguanas come
in the little garden near the restaurant's table !
Across the street from my favorite restaurant they is a forest and next to him a garden with coconuts trees, palms , flowers and iguana
The food is excellent ..and very fresh .
The waiters are very nice and efficient
The panorama est wonderful ! And if you are lucky the iguanas come
in the little garden near the restaurant's table !
Across the street from my favorite restaurant they is a forest and next to him a garden with coconuts trees, palms , flowers and iguana
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near the sea or
at the beach or
on the coast (on the seacoast)
My favorite restaurant is a fish restaurant near the sea. The food is excellent and very fresh. The waiters are very nice and efficient. The panorama is wonderful! And if you are lucky, the iguanas in the little garden come near the restaurant's table! Across the street from my favorite restaurant there is a forest and next to it, a garden with coconut trees, palms, flowers and iguanas.
I agree with the comments of jb48209. In the first sentence, I think you mean to say "facing the sea".
Well done. It reads very well
Liz