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英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 5
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I travelled to Israel several years ago. It was my last vacation. I stayed there for seven days. The most impressive thing was to visit Jerusalem. You can find the city shining gold in the morning and in the evening. Because all houses are built by the Jerusalem stone. If you are interested in the Bible, you can visit several places on foot described in it. Visiting Via Dolorosa, wailing wall, Mt.Olives etc. , I could feel the air of 2000 years ago.
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Very good :D Just one tiny improvement:
"You can find the city shining gold in the morning and in the evening, because all houses are built out of Jerusalem stone. "