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英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 101, 单元 2, 课程 1
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In the morning yesterday I was studying English at Livemocha. In the afternoon I was working in a scouts group.
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AravindMochapoints: 3729 | 教师分: 1878 (0%)See this for Example...."Yesterday Morning I was learn English in Livemocha and afternoon I Worked in the Scouts Group" 一年多前提交的 -
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Yesterday morning, I studied English on Livemocha. In the afternoon, I was working..... Sorry, I'm not sure how to correct the last part of your sentence. I don't know what a "scout group" is. 一年多前提交的 -
RobertMochapoints: 13981 | 教师分: 4011 (100%)Yesterday morning I was studying... Yesterday morning I studied... Either one is correct. It would be more common to use "i was studying" when describing something else that happened at that time. "I was studying English on Livemocha when my friend called. at Livemocha on Livemocha os dois sao iqual, "on" might be more common in the EUA. In the afternoon, I was working in a scouts group. -It might be better to also describe what the scout group was doing - "working in a scout group on a service project". Your sentence implies you are a member of the group, you are "in" the group. If you had written "I was working with.." it would imply your job was to lead the group. 一年多前提交的
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