我的工作
说明：
运用本课词汇形容你的工作。你做什么？你喜欢自己做的事情吗？你在这个领域工作多长时间了？你想一直做这份工作吗？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 3
 Irina's 提交内容: | 平均分数: |
Many great holidays and anniversaries are celebrated in our country. But my favorite holiday is New Year's Day, of course. It is a really wonderful holiday. People get ready for this holiday long before it. They buy New Year trees and decorate them. Every year a fairy-tale comes to every house and every family on New Year's Eve. Children and even grown-ups wait for this day because they believe that all their wishes and desires come true and different wonderful miracles happen on that day. On New Year’s Eve people get together to see “the old year out and the new year in”. They eat tasty food, drink champagne, dance and have a good time together. They wish each other happiness and good luck in the New Year and put the presents under the New Year tree. Children like this holiday very much. They wait for New Year presents, which, they believe, Father Frost brings to them. Everybody is merry on that day and wishes the next year to be good and happy and all one's troubles and disappointments to remain in the past
一年多前提交的
请登录后再查看这项提交登录 |
评论
如何给予好评的小贴士:
具体
- 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
- 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
更正
- 使用编辑功能提供的删除线，粗体或不同颜色的字体。
- 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
- 检查了你的口语练习
- 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。
Irina...excellent! Not only your vocabulary but the use of capital letters and expressions.
Really good job. Keep it going!
great.
i hope to write that someday.
this is very good! I'm impressed
keep up the good work:)
i am jealous you :)
Very, very good. Some minor corrections. Excellent description of New Years.
Many great holidays and anniversaries are celebrated in our country. But my favorite holiday is New Year's Day, of course. It is a really a wonderful holiday. People get ready for this holiday long before it arrives. They buy New Year trees and decorate them. Every year a fairy-tale comes to every house and every family on New Year's Eve. Children and even grown-ups wait for this day because they believe that all their wishes and desires will come true and different wonderful miracles will happen on that day. On New Year’s Eve people get together to see “the old year out and the new year in.” They eat tasty food, drink champagne, dance and have a good time together. They wish each other happiness and good luck in the New Year and put the presents under the New Year tree. Children like this holiday very much. They wait for New Year presents, which they believe, Father Frost brings to them. Everybody is merry on that day and wishes the next year to will be good and happy and all of one's troubles and disappointments to remain in the past
great job!
Oscar.
Very good! Irina.
great job Irina! Your english is getting better and better.this text is very good!
Many great holidays and anniversaries are celebrated in our country. But my favorite holiday is New Year's Day, of course. It is a really a wonderful holiday. People get ready for this holiday long before it arrives. They buy New Year trees and decorate them. Every year a fairy-tale comes to every house and every family on New Year's Eve. Children and even grown-ups wait for this day because they believe that all their wishes and desires will come true and different wonderful miracles will happen on that day. On New Year’s Eve people get together to see “the old year out and the new year in.” They eat tasty food, drink champagne, dance and have a good time together. They wish each other happiness and good luck in the New Year and put the presents under the New Year tree. Children like this holiday very much. They wait for New Year presents, which they believe, Father Frost brings to them. Everybody is merry on that day and wishes the next year to will be good and happy and all of one's troubles and disappointments to remain in the past
Excellent text. I have one doubt about the sentence "Every year a fairy-tale comes to every house". A 'fairy-tale' is a story. Do you mean a 'fairy'?
After reading I have felt the approach of the New Year. It's cool!!!! It's wonderful holiday. And of course it's my favorite holiday too. ... And soon it will be your birthday!!!!
great!
:)
Fine job.
Very well.Ididn't see a certain mistake.