描述天气
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描述五天的天气，解释人们在这样的天气需要什么。例如：今天下雨，很冷。 那个女人需要雨衣和雨伞。
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 102, 单元 4, 课程 3
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The days of this week were of different weather. In monday was raining and many people of my job and of university were wearing raincoat.
In tuesday the weather was better, but it was cloudy, so the people not brought the umbrella.
The weather had continued cloudy,but now, friday, it is sunny and I saw many people using
sunglasses and T shirt.
If the weekend will be sunny too, I´d be very happy.
In tuesday the weather was better, but it was cloudy, so the people not brought the umbrella.
The weather had continued cloudy,but now, friday, it is sunny and I saw many people using
sunglasses and T shirt.
If the weekend will be sunny too, I´d be very happy.
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I would put it like this.......
This week the days were very different in weather.On Monday it was raining and many people at my place of work at the University were wearing raincoats. On Tuesday the weather was better, but it was cloudy, so the people brought their umbrellas. The weather continued to stay cloudy, but now it is Friday and it is sunny and I saw many people using sunglasses and wearing T-Shirts. If the weekend will be sunny I shall be very happy.
very good.
This week, the weather has been different. On Monday, it rained and many people at my workplace at the university wore the raincoats. On Tuesday, the weather was better, but it was still cloudy. So, the people did not bring the umbrellas. The weather had continued cloudy until yesterday. Today is Friday, and it is a sunny day. I see many people wearing sunglassess and t-shirts. If the forthcoming weekend will be sunny also, I shall be very happy.
You have done well.