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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 1, 课程 6

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I THINK I SHOULD BEGIN FROM OBJECT ON MY DESK:
I HAVE ONE CAMPUTER THAT AT THIS MOMENT WRITE THIS REPOT AND I HAVE NEWSPAPER FOR INCREASE INFOMATION AND ADAPTE MY INFORMATION WITH NOWADAYS WORLD NEWS. AND I HAVE PHONE AND ELSE I HAVE CALEDER AND RADIO AND SOME OF BOOKS RELATED MY JOB :BEACAUSE I AM AN ENGINEER AND SOMETIMES NEED THIS REFERENCE AND I HAVE PEN AND IN THE DRAWER I HAVE I HAVE SOME PAPER THAT I WROTE TO OTHER SECTION IN MY WORKING PLACE.
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  • caterina
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    I THINK I SHOULD BEGIN with the OBJECTs ON MY DESK:
    I HAVE ONE CoMPUTER THAT, AT THIS MOMENT, I use to WRITE THIS REPOrT.  AND

    I HAVE a NEWSPAPER FOR INCREASE more INFOMATION AND to update MY INFORMATION WITH NOWADAYS WORLD NEWS of today. (OR ... my information with current affairs).

    AND I HAVE a PHONE AND ELSE I also HAVE a CALEnDaR, AND RADIO AND SOME OF BOOKS RELATED to MY JOB.  Since I AM AN ENGINEER,  I SOMETIMES NEED THIS REFERENCE work.  AND I HAVE a PEN AND, IN THE DRAWER, I HAVE I HAVE SOME PAPER THAT I use to WRiTE TO OTHER SECTIONs IN the company OR my place of employment. 

    Good.   Keep practising!

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