形容你的衣服
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运用本课词汇形容你正在穿的衣服。它用的是什么材料？你通常穿什么去上班？去参加活动或派对时你会穿什么？你最喜欢的套装是哪件？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 1
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Kolkata,the city of joy, may not be all about joy but it has a rhythm of life.In spite of many problems it will give you a feeling of being at home.Kolkata is a historically important city in India.Kolkata and Howhah are twin cities being kept apart by the holy river Ganga (here it's named as Hoogly river).'Durga puja' is the most famous festival here , so I must recommend you have a visit during 'puja season' and you will feel its life within. There is so many places in and around the city to visit. One more thing I'll say, if any of my friend gives a visit to my city,please do try Bengali foods. I can guarantee you will love it.
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Wow! This is exceptional. Just like a native English speaker - better than most of them:))
Amazing! I am coming right now! I was mesmerized by your description! REALLY GREAT! I think I must have left some minor corrections out. However, I do think that you can communicate your ideas easily and this a very good piece of writing! Keep it up!!!!!
Kolkata,the city of joy, may not be all about joy but it has a rhythm of life.In spite of many problems, it will give you a feeling of being at home.Kolkata is a historically important city in India.Kolkata and Howhah are twin cities being kept apart by the holy river Ganga (here it's named as Hoogly river).'Durga puja' is the most famous festival here , so I must would definitely recommend you have come and visit during 'puja season' and you will feel its life within. There are so many places in and around the city to visit. One more thing I'll say, if any of my friend pays a visit to my city,please do try Bengali food. I can guarantee you will love it.
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On this submission, please note these small corrections of grammar, spelling, or style:
a space after all commas and periods (if the period is followed by another sentence); Howrah not Howhah; (here it's called the Hoogly); I must recommend that you visit during 'puja season.' If you do, you will feel its life within.; There are so many places; One more thing I'll say to any of my friends who visits my city:
Now for audio comment on "shirt."
I have spoken audio but without my having been given a clear OK--just a recycle of windows. I don't know what to do about it but later today will consult friends who are more computer knowledgeable.--IR