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英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 102, 单元 5, 课程 3
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I always go to the university by bus, but I sometimes am late. On the weekend, I study English at "El cultural". I don't eat lunch in my house every monday, because I don't have time. I study at library everyday, because There isn't silence in my house; My cousins never are quiet. I visit my parents every week. I usually go to the cinema at friday night.
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Very good. Just a few corrections.
I always go to the university by bus, but I sometimes I am late. On the weekend, I study English at "El cultural". I don't eat lunch in my house every Monday, because I don't have time. I study at the library everyday, because it isn't quiet in my house; my cousins never are quiet. I visit my parents every week. I usually go to the cinema on Friday night.
Very good - just some small changes:
I always go to the university by bus, but sometimes I am late sometimes am late. On the weekend, I study English at "El cultural". I never don't eat lunch in my house on every Monday because I don't have time. I study at the library everyday, because it isn't quiet in my house; My cousins are never are quiet. I visit my parents every week. I usually go to the cinema on Friday night.
Well done.
Very good. Note comments by the two previous reviewers.
Yeah, it was good. Required comments r already given. I would just say Keep it up.
Take Care!!!!!!
I don't eat lunch at my house on monday
I study at the library
I usually go to the cinema on Friday night.
Use capital letters for the names of the weekdays.You did not need a capital letter for the word There.and the sentence should have read as such.I study at the library everyday because there isn't silence in my house.My cousins are never quiet.
I always go to University by bus, but sometimes I am late. On the weekends, I study English at "El cultural". I don't eat lunch in my house on mondays, because I don't have time. I study at the library everyday, because it isn't quiet enough in my house; My cousins are never quiet. I visit my parents every week. I usually go to the cinema on friday night.
I always go to the university by bus, but I sometimes am late but sometimes I am late . On the weekend, I study English at "El cultural" I don't eat lunch in my house every monday, On Mondays I do not eat lunch at home because I don't have time. I study at the library everyday, because There there isn't any silence in my house; My cousins never are never quiet. I visit my parents every week. I usually go to the cinema at friday night.
I always go to the university by bus, but I sometimes am late but sometimes I am late . On the weekend, I study English at "El cultural" I don't eat lunch in my house every monday, On Mondays I do not eat lunch at home because I don't have time. I study at the library everyday, because There there isn't any silence in my house; My cousins never are never quiet. I visit my parents every week. I usually go to the cinema at friday night.
I always go to the university by bus, but I sometimes am late but sometimes I am late . On the weekend, I study English at "El cultural" I don't eat lunch in my house every monday, On Mondays I do not eat lunch at home because I don't have time. I study at the library everyday, because There there isn't any silence in my house; My cousins never are never quiet. I visit my parents every week. I usually go to the cinema at friday night.