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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 1, 课程 1

介绍自己

说明： 介绍你自己。告诉我们你的名字，你好吗，你来自哪里，在哪里住，在哪里工作，等等。 jièshào nǐzìjǐ 。 gàosu wǒmen nǐ de míngzi ， nǐhǎo mǎ ， nǐ láizì nǎli ， zài nǎli zhù ， zài nǎli gōngzuò ， děngděng 。

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MARK is a singer of the Westlife. He is tall and young. He's very rich, I guess.
I am hearing the westlife's music.
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  • Jeff Jackson
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  • Jeff Jackson
    Mochapoints: 1163  |  教师分: 369 (0%)
    Mark is a singer for Westlife. He is tall and young. He's probably very rich. I'm listening to Westlife's music right now.
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  • Vuqar
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    Ni hau I am LISTENING TO ............
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  • Фернандо जोएल
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  • Фернандо जोएल
    Mochapoints: 13534  |  教师分: 5752 (100%)
    Vas bastante bien, continua así.
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  • Erik.
    Mochapoints: 131036  |  教师分: 122678 (100%)
    Congratulations on having completed this writing exercise, it is quite well done! As other users have already left you very useful commentary, I would encourage you simply to continue practicing your writing keeping three things in mind: (1) Always work on improving and expanding your linguistic repertoire, in both vocabulary and grammar, (2) Always respect the rules of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, (3) Always think the subject through thoroughly, answering completely and appropriately to the question asked. Best of luck with your future studies!
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  • bigharry
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    You can also say... Mark is a good singer. He is a member of the band called westlife. He stands out in the group because of his height and looks. Probably he is rich because of his successfull career in the music industry. I love listening to their music. Take note: No need to capital all letters when it's a name...Not MARK....just "Mark". Use "their music" because you used westlife..which is a band/ group *** I hope my comments helps you in a way.
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  • hanzee
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    Jeff Jackson\Vuqar\ferjo1987 \Erik. and bigharry: thanks for your comments
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如何给予好评的小贴士:

具体
  • 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
  • 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
更正
  • 使用编辑功能提供的删除线，粗体或不同颜色的字体。
  • 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
  • 检查了你的口语练习
  • 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。