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英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 5
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Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. So that I'm working now. (or I'm trying to work).
It's sunny, although it' s a little cold.
I don't know what weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
It's sunny, although it' s a little cold.
I don't know what weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
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评论
如何给予好评的小贴士:
具体
- 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
- 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
更正
- 使用编辑功能提供的删除线，粗体或不同颜色的字体。
- 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
- 检查了你的口语练习
- 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。
Today it is March the 24th, 2009. It is not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. Therefore I am working now. (or I am trying to work). It is sunny, although it is a little cold. I do not know what weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
Very well
Charlie's correction are very good. You are doing well,keep it up! J
Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. So so that I'm working now (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it' s a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
Great job!
It's not a special day in Madrid or Spain.
Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day either in Madrid or in Spain (Or: It is a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain) , so [that - optional] I'm working now (no comma) (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it's a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be like tomorrow. But (no comma) I believe (no comma) the weather will be similar to today's. (More natural: But I believe it will be similar to today's).
PS Charlie has turned it into formal English; you can also simply say "Today is March..."
Good job! I would write it as follows:
Today is March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day in Madrid or in Spain, so I'm working now (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it's a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be tomorrow but I believe the weather will be similar to today.
Very good ;)
Keep it up