Active English书写练习 致航空公司的投诉信
假设您刚乘坐东西航空的航班达到其它国家。途中你遇到很多问题。写一封信给这家航空公司，投诉你的飞行旅程中遇到的问题。请采用这种形式。
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East-West AirlinesCustomer Service
12 Jillson Street
Los Angeles, CA
90040
Dear Customer Service,
I have a problem. I was very unhappy with your service on my last flight. I traveled on Flight 62 from Taipei to Amsterdam and on Flight 313 from Amsterdam to Paris on Friday, August 10th. First, the flight from Amsterdam was delayed for three hours. Then my luggage did not arrive in Paris. I didn’t get my suitcase until three days later, on August 13th!
Of course, I needed to buy some clothes and personal items. I spent over $500 on these things. What should I do to recover these expenses?
Sincerely,
Hua-an Lee
It is OK but you stuck a little too closely to the model. The names of companies, streets and company agents (Mr/Ms Customer Service) are capitalized in English. You need to be careful of spacing in your sentences - a space always after a period. Third = rd (3rd), fourth, fifth..... = th (4th, 5th...). Some suggestions and corrections:
South-East Travel AirlinesCustumer Customer Service3 Station StreetNew York, MADear custumer service Customer Service,
I have a problem. I wasn't so happy with your service on my last flight. I traveled on flight 48 from New York to Brussels and on flight 256 from Brussels to Turkye Turkey on Saterday Saturday, May 3th 3rd. First, the flight from Brussels was delayed for two hours. Then my luggage did not arrive in Turkye Turkey. I didn't get my suitcase until tree three days later, on May 6th.
Of course, I needed to buy some clothes and personal items. I spent over €500 on these things. What should I do to recover these expenses?
Sincerely,
Jany Geats